The strange condition of a realized one

erez's picture



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A realized one
A container in a strange condition
That caved in to pressure
That gave up the person it contained
But that, strange enough,
Continues to function
Probably
For the benefit of some other high cause
Or simply due to inertia
Until all mental and physical reservoirs
Are finally exhausted.



Asanga's picture

..........................

Wow!
I am, yet I am not...

Asanga | Thu, 03/27/2014 - 10:40
sisi's picture

The negative turns to positive

An incredible poem describing in words that which is so hard to describe and fathom.

Funny that the description "That caved in to pressure, That gave up the person it contained" has a negative connotation in almost any other circumstances except of this context.

sisi | Fri, 03/28/2014 - 07:23